Francis Ray, Dreaming in Moonlight

Posted June 1, 2011 by Kathy Davie in

Dreaming in Moonlight by Francis Ray
My rating: 2.5 of 5 stars

A new short romantic story about one sister trying to protect another from making the same mistake she did.

The best I can say for it is the idea was sweet…as sweet, I’m assuming, as Rebecca’s chocolates. And there were intervals of good writing. Unfortunately, the intervals of bad writing were more frequent. Right along with the huge jumps in the plot action.

If Dreaming in Moonlight is an example of Ray’s writing, I’ll pass.