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Ménage a Tracy
It is part of the Ménage a #1 series and is a in eBook edition on February 22, 2014 and has 30 pages.
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First in the Ménage a downright pornographic series and revolving around Tracy.
My Take
It’s graphic and in-your-face, literally, with the sex and juices and streams of whatever. Unfortunately, I didn’t find it at all erotic as I kept stumbling over missing commas, wrong verb tenses, poor pronoun usage, a lack of understanding of the possessive, double articles, a confusion about than versus then, misspelled words, capitalization issues, and on and on. Basically? A disaster, and that’s without taking the story into account.
Although, to be fair, I think March could have a story here, and it’s possible that she’s letting out chapters at a time in order to build up interest in future installments. The parts-of-a-story sales that I really hate. Why can’t authors simply write the damn story and then sell it? Oh, no, I do understand why they do this. To raise interest in the upcoming chapters so they can sell ’em for 99¢ a pop. All this does for me is tick me off.
So, getting back to March’s story. It’s rough (in the writing sense), and I suspect that March’s concentration on Tracy’s uncertainty about Mike’s participation in their ménage even as Tracy looks forward to her part of the fun is the story with all the sex thrown in to fill out Tracy’s increasing emotional angst.
And those will be the biggest words you won’t find in the story.
“Almost on the verge”?? Is that like a little bit pregnant?
I can understand why March is listing this as a freebie, and I can’t wait to give it back.
The best I can say about this? It’s a seriously dirty story with seriously desperate proofreading required. Considering it’s only 30 pages, I should have thought March could (and urgently should) afford a proofreader.
The Story
Mike is introducing Tracy to some friends of his. Friends who are interested in going farther than a moonlit swim in the nude.
Tracy’s attracted, but is Mike a little too interested?
The Characters
Tracy is with Mike, and John is with Shelly.
The Cover and Title
The cover is a woman kneeling away from us in her fuck-me pumps, stockings, and a garter belt, bare-ass to the fore.
The title is the total focus of this story, a Ménage a Tracy.
