Revised as of
25 Nov 2022
No, no, no, no . . . it’s an incomplete sentence. It makes me nuts when writers have their characters hear the heart beats. The heart beats what? Or maybe I should ask who the heart is beating up?
When you look at it, heart beat is a phrase combining a noun and a verb. It must be treated as a noun and a verb. The character would “hear the beats of their heart” or “how the heart beats”, maybe
“how quickly his heart beats”, and make a lot more sense.
If what you want is a noun and just a noun, you want heartbeat. It’s one word: “a victim’s heartbeats” or “her heartbeats gave her away”, which is another thing entirely.
You may also want to explore “Heart Beat versus Heartbeat“, “Heart Broken / Broken Heart versus Heartbroken“, and even “Hardy versus Hearty“.
Word Confusions . . .
. . . started as my way of dealing with a professional frustration with properly spelled words that were out of context in manuscripts I was editing as well as books I was reviewing. It evolved into a sharing of information with y’all. I’m hoping you’ll share with us words that have been a bête noire for you from either end. Consider sharing this Word Confusion with friends by tweeting it.
Heart Beat | Heartbeat |
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Part of Grammar: | |
Phrase: Noun + Verb
More of a metaphor |
Noun Usually heartbeats More science- or tech-oriented |
This phrase generally is interpreted with:
It can also be quite literal. |
One complete pulsation of the heart
A brief space of time |
Examples: | |
The vampire heard his beating heart.
My heart beat for her. “Oh boy, my heart beats more than a lakh times a day” (Invisible, 37). “My heart starts missing a beat every time” (Heart). |
The vampire heard the heartbeat of his victim.
He is the man who is just a heartbeat away from the presidency. I’d do it again in a heartbeat. Conflict is the essential heartbeat of fiction. Her heartbeats steadied as the injection took effect. I accepted their offer in a heartbeat. |
History of the Word: | |
Unknown. | Its first known use was in 1850. |
C’mon, get it out of your system, bitch, whine, moan . . . which words are your pet peeves? Also, please note that I try to be as accurate as I can, but mistakes happen or I miss something. Email me if you find errors, so I can fix them . . . and we’ll all benefit!
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Resources for Heart Beat versus Heartbeat
Apple Dictionary.com
“Heart.” PetShopBoys.co.uk. <https://www.petshopboys.co.uk/lyrics/heart>.
“Invisible Injustices.” Indian Currents. 11 July 2016. Web. 25 Nov 2022. <https://www.thefreelibrary.com/Invisible+Injustices+-+37-a0457545199>.
Pinterest Photo Credits
Doctor Uses Stethoscope to Listen to Girl’s Heart Closeup by Nenad Stojkovic is under the CC BY 2.0 license, via Flickr.